its a bit rough around the edges, but i love the feel and melody - i think the snare needs more high end on it!
tidy it up and it will be delicious :D
Jazz Master Flash
hey man, nice WIP
I love the percussion, especially the toms (?) - they sound mint!
Not too keen on the wobble itself though, sounds a little tinny - maybe throw a layer underneath it which is really low freq? i think that might make it less ear-achey...
saying that, this is a WIP so its probably a fart compared to the finished product
keep it up broski :)
Well, if you're having problems with the trebles, it could be that the treble's just a tad too high. I cannot WAIT till I get my new headphones so that I can correct some of this stuff!
Cant wait to hear the finished version dude, so far it sounds cheeky as fuck :D
you may say its crap, but i actually really enjoyed the "loseness" of the bass in this - went against the normal dubstep shite, and i like that :D
i loved it!
constructive criticism gogogo!
a) think it needs to be longer (after the drop)
b) don't like that kick, i think a simple (undistorted, less gabber like) kick would do this track more justice
apart from that, i loved the melodies and tune, so im going to listen to it again! hurrah!
i very rarely give 10's!
this was badass! reminded me of boregore - relaxation dub (the bass noize) but nevertheless i enjoyed it. moar.
p.s. check out my industrial-ish dub track *digga digga* - not as varied as yours but im all for experimental dub!
Thank you very much sir for your generous 10! I've actually heard your song, but I have yet to drop you a review...no worries man, I'll hit you up as soon as I can!
:D i really...
enjoyed this take on this track. very nice sounding, especially when i crank up my sub!
keep it up dude :)
NO. up to 1:05 it was awesome - but when it dropped, it was heartbreaking. it sounded so promising and then nothing happened! that was such an anticlimax! you cant do that, its not fair. the reason im bitching so much is because this sounds really good, but that drop just ruined it for me - hence the 7!
track may need to be longer too!
you dont like that? i shall try to change it to make it an epic climax ^_^
this has a very original sound! quiet eery, something about this track has kept me hooked. the reason i gave a 9 is that i find there is something lacking - possibly a bassline (DnB;Dub step style) to go along with the percussion - and maybe some hats would go down well!
i look forward to hearing more!
keep up the good work dude.
Yeah I thought I about adding some hats and a bassline, but I got lazy and I was afraid it would take the song in a different direction and when I finished what I had (without the hats and bassline) I really liked the feel of it. However, I will go back and try it out with some hats and a bassline to see how it plays out.
Thanks for the review!
i like the pirate talk - it reminded me off something of toy story haha
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