hmm
its a bit rough around the edges, but i love the feel and melody - i think the snare needs more high end on it!
tidy it up and it will be delicious :D
hmm
its a bit rough around the edges, but i love the feel and melody - i think the snare needs more high end on it!
tidy it up and it will be delicious :D
yeah :3
Jazz Master Flash
hey man, nice WIP
I love the percussion, especially the toms (?) - they sound mint!
Not too keen on the wobble itself though, sounds a little tinny - maybe throw a layer underneath it which is really low freq? i think that might make it less ear-achey...
saying that, this is a WIP so its probably a fart compared to the finished product
keep it up broski :)
Well, if you're having problems with the trebles, it could be that the treble's just a tad too high. I cannot WAIT till I get my new headphones so that I can correct some of this stuff!
i very rarely give 10's!
this was badass! reminded me of boregore - relaxation dub (the bass noize) but nevertheless i enjoyed it. moar.
p.s. check out my industrial-ish dub track *digga digga* - not as varied as yours but im all for experimental dub!
Thank you very much sir for your generous 10! I've actually heard your song, but I have yet to drop you a review...no worries man, I'll hit you up as soon as I can!
WHAT! NO!!!
NO. up to 1:05 it was awesome - but when it dropped, it was heartbreaking. it sounded so promising and then nothing happened! that was such an anticlimax! you cant do that, its not fair. the reason im bitching so much is because this sounds really good, but that drop just ruined it for me - hence the 7!
track may need to be longer too!
you dont like that? i shall try to change it to make it an epic climax ^_^
really nice
this has a very original sound! quiet eery, something about this track has kept me hooked. the reason i gave a 9 is that i find there is something lacking - possibly a bassline (DnB;Dub step style) to go along with the percussion - and maybe some hats would go down well!
i look forward to hearing more!
keep up the good work dude.
Yeah I thought I about adding some hats and a bassline, but I got lazy and I was afraid it would take the song in a different direction and when I finished what I had (without the hats and bassline) I really liked the feel of it. However, I will go back and try it out with some hats and a bassline to see how it plays out.
Thanks for the review!
-Matt
nice!
my only constructive criticism for this is add some reverb to the snare as it sounds too flat!
im really enjoying the simplicity of this track! very beautiful :)
Thanks Genjo. I'll be sure to take the snare to the next level of awesome when I get the chance. Be good or be good at it! Peace.
hmmmmmmmm
*cough* blutonium hardstyle vol.2*cough*
i like it from 2 minutes onwards until 2:30ish - but this song has no structure really : /
youve got a lot to improve on but that will come with time. the samples (quotes) are pretty random too
and its fairly repetitive
yeah i used samples before, but i dont do anymore ^^ Try listen to some of the others i uploaded. As i said, this was the first, i was much noob when i made this, now im just noob :D!
But thanks for your comment ill do my best for future songs =)
wobwobwob
0:18 the bassy synth works really well, from there onwards -
i think the alternate bass (the one which resonates more) should be a dirrrty "wob wob wob"
other than that this is pretty sweet :D nice to see some dub
Glad you liked it ill keep that in mind.
hey
youve got my 10 and a 5 - i never give anything that :|
epic dude. i love it.
Thanks, man! You should check out MaestroRage, his music is epic AND professional sounding. I was listening to his music before I wrote this, I owe him a great deal, his music and advice has shown me a lot about classical orchestration and musicianship.
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